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Dot in the Sky ([personal profile] dotinthesky) wrote2006-10-22 08:55 pm
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Using the Random Search Productively

Creative writing exercise: find a random post (you can do that through My LJ, for example) and select one sentence from the entry.

Paste that sentence into a word document and write a page of prose/poem that includes it.

I used this girl's post, and chose the sentence And lindsey, next time you want to try to make your friends hate me, make sure that i CARE first.



The phone rang all morning, but Sarah made a point of not picking it up. She knew it would be one of them, breathing down the line, calling her names – trying their best to make her cry. She let the phone ring for an hour before pulling its cord from the socket.

When Lindsey came home from cheerleading practice, she called her into the kitchen and asked her to sit down. Lindsey pretended not to hear her; she stood by the fridge, twisting her hair and chewing a banana, while reading their mom's latest note.

‘I know what you’re up to,’ Sarah said, crossing her arms. ‘I want you to stop.’

‘I don’t know what you’re talking about. You’re crazy.’

‘Oh really? So you think I don’t know what you’ve been telling your friends about me? Why do you hate me so much?’

‘Get a grip, Sarah. I don’t care.’

Lindsey spun on her heels and was about to leave the kitchen when Sarah grabbed her arm and pulled her down on a stool by the counter.

‘Not so fast,’ she said.

‘Ouch, you bitch! You are hurting me!’

‘How dare you spread lies about me in school?’

Lindsey, still pretending she didn’t know what was going on, slammed her palms on the counter and shouted at her eldest sister:

‘For crying out loud! I have no clue what you’re talking about!’

‘This house’s phone has been ringing non-stop, the whole morning. I picked it up the first three times and heard girls screaming at me, breathing loudly, basically acting like imbeciles. Now why would they do that?’

‘Because they are your friends and they have nothing better to do with their time?’

This infuriated Sarah. Lindsey knew as well as anyone else that Sarah didn’t have any friends.

‘When you’ve got some proof I’m involved with this, you get back to me,’ Lindsey said, lifting her chin defiantly and stomping out of the kitchen.

‘And Lindsey, next time you want to try to make your friends hate me, make sure that I CARE first,’ Sarah shouted at her sister’s retreating form.

[identity profile] tonight-we-fly.livejournal.com 2006-10-22 08:40 pm (UTC)(link)
From this post (http://peachoptimo420.livejournal.com/17690.html)

im just totally meesed up today

I’ve had a hard weekend. Climbing trees, chasing defenceless small birds, getting friendly with humans (suckers!) for treats and affection whenever the whim takes me.

It would be a charmed life if it wasn’t for those damned meeses. It may sound horribly clichéd, but I really do hate meeses to pieces. Twitching their impertinent little noses, galloping around on my territory! Dropping tiny little anti-nuggets of mouse poo on my hallowed ground. The scurrying; oh, the horrible scurrying... Wiggling their grim worm-like tails as they scamper across my domain. Little bastards.

I have learned that, in all nine of my lives, there are three things that I can’t catch. Birds: easy. Humans: a piece of piss. But I can’t catch aeroplanes; however high I jump, they always seem to be just that teasingly small distance too high. And I can’t catch “Wheel People” (what do they call them, bicyclers or something?) because they just zoom by, and never seem to pause for breath. I expect that they must rule the human world.

The third category of evasion is meeses. This one really hurts. Look at those tiny little legs! And that minuscule little head; surely there is no room whatsoever for a brain in there? And yet they evade me. Every single time. The saddest thing is that they don’t even do it to taunt me; they seem completely oblivious to the gauntlet that they’re throwing down in front of my paws, the abject sense of failure which they saturate my life with. It sometimes feels like they’re killing me.

I chased six meeses this afternoon, and every single one of the buggers zipped into the nearest hole as if they were being whipped in by a piece of violently strong elastic. When the next appearance is made, I don’t even know whether I have the emotional stamina to chase the seventh. I’m just totally meesed up today.

[identity profile] commonpeople.livejournal.com 2006-10-22 09:42 pm (UTC)(link)
nice one. ;-)

[identity profile] blindscouse.livejournal.com 2006-10-22 09:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Can you remind me how you search for random people? Isn't there a thing which takes you to a random lj? Where is it?

Many thanks x

[identity profile] commonpeople.livejournal.com 2006-10-22 09:44 pm (UTC)(link)
There was an option before in the main page, but that disappeared with their new design. Go to http://www.livejournal.com/portal/, then click on "Add Content Module". You can then select to have a random journal appear everytime you refresh that page (the journal appears at the bottom right corner.)

Alternatively, you can go here http://www.livejournal.com/portal/ then pick one randomly to read.

[identity profile] commonpeople.livejournal.com 2006-10-22 09:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Actually, this link will pop a random journal everytime: www.livejournal.com/random.bml
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[identity profile] commonpeople.livejournal.com 2006-10-23 07:10 am (UTC)(link)
From which journal?

[identity profile] rojagato.livejournal.com 2006-10-23 07:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks for the exercise! I haven't done it yet, but here's a NYT article on how Brazil is keepin' it real.

[identity profile] commonpeople.livejournal.com 2006-10-23 08:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Great article! Thanks... I agree with it 100%. The language in Brasil is very strong, vital and constantly evolving. Slang words I learned from visits a few years ago quickly go out of use, and new ones come into play. Brasil is a true melting pot, taking all the influeces thrown at it and changing it to suit itself.

[identity profile] saint-narcissus.livejournal.com 2006-10-24 07:25 pm (UTC)(link)
(Olli, Doug Pexa and I do this frequently, great exercise! this is most from your journal,various bits and pieces words of my own sewn together with,,, -David)


modest in its
dependence on random culture
celebration walks the line
do not fear enemy
I fear friendship
walk
hand with
brother human our foibles look in to each others
mirrors the night sets in
attack the rumour
first and fire works
last
quiet fears
find truth
universal
good fortune son
however little known the feelings
David Bowie suggesting
I might fall into his arms like
flower pouting &
posing hipster
I remember
bored and dying in
unknown city we all live in
separation and difference is staring
empty circles fog before
noon wandered downtown's streets sad
last night until the moment
fingers trace tears
across your face how complete
become children play at love
away from faces that stare make it up
as you go along another sunset
always this happy shiny person of smiles
of love and understand
all ways seems enough can not
decide on which myth
to believe in now

[identity profile] commonpeople.livejournal.com 2006-10-24 09:47 pm (UTC)(link)
That's brilliant! How did you do it? Did you just pick randomly or did you have some kind of LJ machine to do so?

[identity profile] saint-narcissus.livejournal.com 2006-10-24 09:54 pm (UTC)(link)
on this what i did was cut and past a chunk of your lj. maybe last 15 posts. then went through and deleted big pieces, saving what caught my eye. next I randomly cut and pasted what was left and added words of continuation. some times when Doug and I do this he'll through me a randon #, say "6" I will then take some thing of his, keep every 6th word. and work from that. It is all ways fun and brilliant for writers block!

Peace&Love, -David

[identity profile] commonpeople.livejournal.com 2006-10-25 07:14 am (UTC)(link)
I'm going to try it tonight. ;-)